2011년 1월 17일 월요일

Writig in 1st, 2nd, 3rd Narratives

1st person-
I'm GLPS students. I hate this camp. I have my roommates and they also hate this camp. Luckly, we are all in the same class so we could make plans. Our plan is to take taxi and go to Seoul. However, all we had was 40000 won. We needed 100000won to arrive our city. Fortunately, we had snacks so we sold it to other GLPS students. We collected 20000 so our total was 60000 won. We still need 40000 won more. We couldn't think of any good plans so we planned to still money from the vending machine. That night, we collected 40000 won and made 100000 won!! The next day was sking. We planned to run away after sking. Finally, the ski was finished, and we gathered together. We caught a taxi and started to  leave. However, the  head PA started to follow us!! I didn't really worry because taxi was more fater than him. We arrived in Seoul. We are free!!!-The end-

2nd person-
You are now in GLPS camp. You don't really like the camp. So your roommates and you started to make plans to get out of this camp. However, all you have is only 40000won. To arrive in Seoul which is your city, it costs 100000 won. You have snacks to sell to GLPS students. You earned 20000 won. You still need 40000 won. You are thinking of another plan but there are no answer. You had to still 40000 won from the vending machine. You finally collected 100000 won. The next day is sking. After sking, you don't take your GLPS bus. You take taxi. However, head PA tried to follow you. The taxi was more fater than him. You finally arrive your home town.-The end_

3rd person-
There were 6students who hated GLPS. They were all in class 22 and all lived in 202. They were in same class, same room so they could make plans. They planned to take taxis but it was too expensive. All they had was 40000won. They needed to have 100000 to take taxi. However, they had all kinds of snacks that kids loved. They sold these snacks to GLPS students. They earned 20000won for it. they had to collect 40000 more won. Finally, they planned to steal money!!! It was 3am night when they started their plan. They went to cafetaria vending machine and stole money there!!! They finally collected 100000won!!!The next day was the day they were going to ski. When the ski was finished, they didn't go to bus. They ran away!! The Head PA got a call that 6 students were stealing money in vending machine. GLPS sent him the pictures of  6boys that was in the security camera. PA noticed that they weren't in the bus. He saw them running!! However, it was too late. They were already in taxi!!-The end-


[ I really like GLPS!!! This is just a story that I made ]

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